Broken

Vision- I love art that tells a story but doesn't really explain whats going on which keeps them geussing. This is crucial becuase throughout the time they're guessing they're looking at your work. This is that kind of art. I saw this picture I started wondering what was wrong and I started thinking what might be going on.

Originality- Sure, there are lots of pictures of girls looking sad or depressed but what saved you was the tears and way she's sitting. Everytime a girl crys they want curl up into a ball but most artists portray that feeling.

Techinique- I love the technique. The first thing I saw were the tears so it was great that you made the tears so visible. Then I saw you the emotion in the girls face which was good because some artists might just draw the eye and then a tear on the cheek then leave it. Plus, the way you shaded really helped focus the attention the girl's face.

Impact- This picture impacte me emotionally. You know how people say things give off vibes? This drawing gives off a sad vibe. That's a good thing. When you pass by happy person the street with a huge smile, even if your in a bad mood you feel at least a little happier. That's what this drawing does.

Keep creating, nice work!